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Black man hates White man, and Green man loathes Gray,
Gray man beats Red, for his deviant ways,
Red man and Scarlet have always been close,
And form an alliance against other folk.
Purple and Beige men are all quite convinced,
The world would be better without men of Pink,
And the heinous acts meted out by the Golds,
On the poor Pastel factions are best left untold.
The cultures of Yellow and Blue are now past,
As Green men subsumed them and wiped out their caste,
And Brown men have conquered what's left of the Tans,
All driven by fear of their fellow man.
From the midst of this chaos arises some hope,
The words of calm reason to love other folk,
And who is the prophet ending this plight,
It's the unshackled blind man who has the best sight.
Gray man beats Red, for his deviant ways,
Red man and Scarlet have always been close,
And form an alliance against other folk.
Purple and Beige men are all quite convinced,
The world would be better without men of Pink,
And the heinous acts meted out by the Golds,
On the poor Pastel factions are best left untold.
The cultures of Yellow and Blue are now past,
As Green men subsumed them and wiped out their caste,
And Brown men have conquered what's left of the Tans,
All driven by fear of their fellow man.
From the midst of this chaos arises some hope,
The words of calm reason to love other folk,
And who is the prophet ending this plight,
It's the unshackled blind man who has the best sight.
Literature
Joy
One magical summer was all it took
For me to fall in love with you
I was no longer a closed book
I finally found someone I could talk to.
Picnics in the middle of the forest
Flowers in my hair
A thousand vows we promised
Never each other's happiness to impair.
We stand peering into the lake
My reflection always right next to yours
Nothing on Earth could ever break
Our eternal love on these shores.
The enchanting summer of 2012
The season that changed my life
With you into another world I would delve
A world completely absent of strife.
And now I confidently beside you stand
Beautifully adorned in my ivory dress
Our futures a
Literature
Fermentation
Malt
from tree to femur.
Curl
from wave to throat.
Pool
from cliff to iris.
Devolve
from rust to skin.
Heart
slivers to paper mache,
creases to flame,
ashes to steel.
Literature
Lion Heart
It is building up deep within her fragile body like a heaving monsoon forming over the dry, cracked, heavy heat of an African savannah; an unforgiving and all-consuming storm desperately willing to drown out its less than fleeting welcome. Flickering with ceaseless coils of skin-searing energy like a grey-faced fugitive's adrenaline stricken heartbeat, it is not a bringer of life, but a threat to it—and even the most reckless are hardwired to take flight in the face of such a colossal and uncompromising foe.
Beyond these white-washed walls, the world would have her believe that she is brave, a lioness, an exception confronted
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Overall
Vision Originality Technique ImpactVision:
Using the stereotype of color and colors really brings the message about racism forward. It presents it in a way that confront without accusing.
Originality:
You have worked in layers of social and political meaning, while at the same time presenting racism in a way that shows all readers how the presence of it really effects everyone.
Technique:
The strongest aspect of this piece if the internal and external rhyme scheme, which makes it easier to read.
Impact:
This poem has the potential to change the world in a positive way. It will get people: Am i really racist?